SUNLINE (draft)
Sew muscle & so never fatigue or rarely or balance
on edge of rolled glass blue on kitchen on before you
rose & only
after such effort as
charley-horser you
( ). Say we pulled not and spent not
& not one butterfly w/aluminum wings for which
might oh'd & oh'd
& oh made cup with
hands
& saw anyway daylight orange through curved
palms & saw through as no formal gesture
no motion
slow photograph but
opening & stuck &
carved into place & diminutive gravities us gap.

Comments
Really nice draft. Now I get why that was so hard to post on the free ick...
Posted by: Lyco | June 9, 2007 12:08 PM
G, I'm telling you, this one is ready.
Posted by: Adam | June 9, 2007 04:29 PM